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Chapter 5 
And yeah, it'll give a bit more insight into Maya's past; and Connor's other internal conflict. Tension builds up a bit more here. But please leave a comment if you'd like! Thank you so much!
Chapter 6: [link]
And yeah, it'll give a bit more insight into Maya's past; and Connor's other internal conflict. Tension builds up a bit more here. But please leave a comment if you'd like! Thank you so much!Chapter 6: [link]
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Technique ImpactI have a very clear imiage of whats going on. I love how thought of everything on your own. I was surpised with your writing I love how you combined 2012 and 1774 together. If I do end up writing fanfictions I would like to use some of your techniques if that's okay with you. All the way during the chapters I always know who's doing what and why!
The cover picture has very excellent shadowing and crisp lines that you can see very well. Did you draw that? Because of the way you wrote the story I have much respect for you! Your writing is how everyone should write! As a writer you need to give the reader a clear vision of what someone is doing or how they look.
I have no doubt in your writing. I would love to see you write more in the future!